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is love is just finding someone that finds you as fascinating as you find yourself? - oh shit, lolthis isn't what you were saying, but you got me thinking and all of a sudden i came to that (very...
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or more that someone confirms your hope that you might be fascinatingfrom east to west: k. rochelle, w. howe, j. chan, b. trippe, the cheese poets, and more
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jim, these aren't my impressions on your poem at all, ya know? just things you started me thinking.from east to west: k. rochelle, w. howe, j. chan, b. trippe, the cheese poets, and more
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pj, i don't think your thoughts are that far afield, actually. the poem, as i see it, portrays a woman who has just fallen in love, and who suddenly discovers that he may find her attractive and...
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yes...we surely dofrom east to west: k. rochelle, w. howe, j. chan, b. trippe, the cheese poets, and more
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i don't think, either, that it's all that "unromantic" to discover someone who finds you as fascinating as you find yourself. we do grow up with some idea of who we are and what we look like in the...
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nice one, jim...i understand d's impulse to end on 'oh god fuck me'which is more dramatic...you might want to consider striking 'fruited plains' as well...seems a bit of a stretch for a woman to...
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oh..and if you read that line'o god fuck me' as an expression of revelation and surprise it works perfectly fine rather than as an exhortation...i guess it's easy to trip up on the first time around...
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thanks, ray -- the author sure thinks you got it right lol. fuck is a word that often works in several directions at once. god too, for that matter.
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Quote:at its greatest height, perhaps, love can return us to the best part of who we are yes! that is so weird. i have a half hour commute to work and do a lot of thinking then and that is a...
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me too, pj. me too. i'm glad you feel that way. it's the only healthy way to approach things.
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"love is just finding someone that finds you as fascinating as you find yourself"- The PeeJerz- you are a piece of work, aren't you ... mwah hah hah ... best line on this thread, incidentally.
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what a treat to get to read this poem tonight, and the wonderful dialogue in the comments. I have stopped wishing I were wise like you and pj in these matters , now I just try to pay very close...
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I'm with Ray. I don't know what else to say, cept, good poem.cheers. Going Deeper
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thanks, tasha. it's kind of a poem for spring, you know. the older i get, the only stories that interest me very much are about people falling in love. might be just a myth, all that stuff, but it's...
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